Hummm, this one pretty good, but maybe could be more developed, like he fall and boom!! the storyline has a full 180° change, and with that bring some holes in the story, I wish that it have been more chapters cause maybe the story would be more cool, cause the character are so good their personality seems amazing and they have so much potencial, i feel like it could show more of their own story.. But anyway it was a good read...
Hummm, this one pretty good, but maybe could be more developed, like he fall and boom!! the storyline has a full 180° change, and with that bring some holes in the story, I wish that it have been more chapters cause maybe the story would be more cool, cause the character are so good their personality seems amazing and they have so much potencial, i feel like it could show more of their own story..
But anyway it was a good read...