-The story was pretty boring -The MC can't take a strong stand that she can stick to, she just goes along with whatever the ML wants. -Their relationship seems to be purely based on them living together, it lacks depth and appears to be purely based on following the "logical" order of things. -What about her life here and on earth? How did she get a job?
This story was a 3/5 for me, however, it has the groundwork for an interesting story. Unfortunately, it wasn't well thought through, and that potential shall remain as potential. The story is very average/basic and we don't get to know the main character enough. I would love to see her in different settings, showing different aspects of her personality, maybe even being a strong independent woman from time to time. Perhaps she could develop on her past self (include the backstory of her life before) and maybe change as a person?
Modern-day storytelling relies on character development, rather than the passage of events. There wasn't much of that here :/, just events and things that happened and the FL isn't even able to bring up a serious topic with the ML.
I am disappointed especially since this author's other story is pretty good.
-The story was pretty boring
-The MC can't take a strong stand that she can stick to, she just goes along with whatever the ML wants.
-Their relationship seems to be purely based on them living together, it lacks depth and appears to be purely based on following the "logical" order of things.
-What about her life here and on earth? How did she get a job?
This story was a 3/5 for me, however, it has the groundwork for an interesting story. Unfortunately, it wasn't well thought through, and that potential shall remain as potential. The story is very average/basic and we don't get to know the main character enough. I would love to see her in different settings, showing different aspects of her personality, maybe even being a strong independent woman from time to time. Perhaps she could develop on her past self (include the backstory of her life before) and maybe change as a person?
Modern-day storytelling relies on character development, rather than the passage of events. There wasn't much of that here :/, just events and things that happened and the FL isn't even able to bring up a serious topic with the ML.
I am disappointed especially since this author's other story is pretty good.