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You're right. I was expecting something more twisted and emotional. Didn't get the plot at all and didn't make me want to re-read it.
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You're right. I was expecting something more twisted and emotional. Didn't get the plot at all and didn't make me want to re-read it.
Its a good story but its a pity that it wasnt well developed. There was too much going on and not enough space to develop the characters and the plot. What a pity.