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YaoiLover24 March 3, 2021 12:17 am

First off all I find them adorable. The art was also beautiful. Enjoyed every bit of this.

However the whole thing felt a bit rushed to me. They went from meeting, to kissing then fucking and finally the uke moving abroad for the seme. I understand everyone has their own timeline when it comes to love so I do get it in a way. They could have taken their time to get to know each other since it doesn't seem like they do. They were kinda horny 24/7 which honestly didn't bother me but I wanted to see them form a deeper connection if you know what I mean.

Also why did they decide it was a good idea for them to live in the village as a gay couple if it's illegal and you can get arrested? This was glossed over and I'm confused as to their reasoning.

Furthermore the seme mentioned initially that his people don't fall in love but then he did 5' later. A bit contradicting but cute nonetheless so I'll let it go. He also said in his culture cheating is not a problem since they're polygamous/polyamorous. So are they exclusive or not? The uke mentioned he's personally monogamous so that would be a problem no? This was never brought up again. Also some girlfriends were mentioned at some point. I'm still confused about their status lol. Please enlighten me if I missed something.

There were some very heavy and interesting topics to be discussed but they were glossed over. I wish the manga dived in a bit more in those things as well. Would have been very interesting.

Overall adorable read, highly recommend! I just think it could have been so much better. Maybe a 2nd volume would do the trick!

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    Kate March 5, 2021 6:01 am

    I saw the start and immediately down voted because im in love w this story... then I read what you wrote and I have to agree haha. Maybe the top is poly and the bottom is mono? There is a lot to unpack here, I'd love for the author to do a second season or smth

    YaoiLover24 March 5, 2021 1:27 pm
    I saw the start and immediately down voted because im in love w this story... then I read what you wrote and I have to agree haha. Maybe the top is poly and the bottom is mono? There is a lot to unpack here, I'... Kate

    Yeah I'd love to know more about them and their dynamic as a couple!