It could have been a great story if it was written properly with enough elements to bind the reader and proper amount of drama and romance... instead it felt like it was all over the place... it was like one moment writer wanted to write something and in the next chapter suddenly it's entirely different thing it was very loosely written.... Instead of telling a single proper story it was more like writer wanted to merge all kind of different plots into one and that also was done half heartedly... PS: I m really sorry if I m being mean in my comment but its just my honest critical opinion I really don't want to hurt anyone.
It could have been a great story if it was written properly with enough elements to bind the reader and proper amount of drama and romance... instead it felt like it was all over the place... it was like one moment writer wanted to write something and in the next chapter suddenly it's entirely different thing it was very loosely written....
Instead of telling a single proper story it was more like writer wanted to merge all kind of different plots into one and that also was done half heartedly...
PS:
I m really sorry if I m being mean in my comment but its just my honest critical opinion I really don't want to hurt anyone.