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I actually like it
I've seen worse. Way worse.
Exactly, this is in fact readable, sure it could use some tweaking, but I understand the story, I'm interested in the story. Therefore it's fine.
OMG, This is SUCKS! PLease learn and train more! The Storyline and drawing are sucks. Like a crappy manga imitation. Even more amateur porn doujinshikas are better than this so called 'manga'.