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I liked it, but I feel a bit unsatisfied. I wanted more insight into Hiromu. Since the sto...

tiggipi February 22, 2016 5:01 pm

I liked it, but I feel a bit unsatisfied. I wanted more insight into Hiromu. Since the story was mostly from Ichi's perspective, it was like Hiromu magically switched from disgust to jealousy in a matter of days. I'm sure there was a lot more to it than that, but with the one-sided way it was written it felt rushed.

Still a very, very cute story overall. I really enjoyed reading it :D Gonna go read more about Jin now.

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    DeeDee May 28, 2016 10:03 pm

    My thoughts exactly. In fact, I feel as though Ichi's reaction to Hiromu distancing himself from him is not appropriate. I mean, your best friend gets so mad and "disgusted" with you and doesn't speak to you again from highschool, until he's done with college and you feel bad that he's so disgusted by who you are?! You missed years of being there for each other through thick and thin! How do you feel so bad for him that you want him to "forgive" you for being who you are? I mean, I'd actually feel betrayed by Hiromu if it were me. I personally think Hiromu didn't deserve Ichi and should have worked harder to get him. Hoenyed words shouldn't have worked in this case. But, that's just my opinion!