Honestly, for a webtoon that has a main focus on authors it’s pretty bad with plot development. When I started reading this, yes I was expecting a mess with relationships. It’s just a form of dramatic tension, and what story is fun without it? When you start with something, normal story progression is expected. For example, at least make Doona finish the ONE class (semester really) she was signed up for. Then start on a new arc. I understand that this is essentially porn/author’s fantasies. But at this point Doona doesn’t even have a consistent character ie she doesn’t even have basic core values set. She goes “I want to be aware of my partners and how they feel” to straight up “I can’t give more than a rat’s ass about you.” Honestly, it’s amazing that Minho and Doona even survived in Korea. The whole culture is very collectivist, so seeing Minho and Doona survive past college without any maturity is amazing. Overall, I see it very difficult to really have a resolution to this story. Was the porn nice? Yeah. Will I keep reading? No. I like plot filled porn, so pass. Just like S Flower for me.
Honestly, for a webtoon that has a main focus on authors it’s pretty bad with plot development. When I started reading this, yes I was expecting a mess with relationships. It’s just a form of dramatic tension, and what story is fun without it? When you start with something, normal story progression is expected. For example, at least make Doona finish the ONE class (semester really) she was signed up for. Then start on a new arc. I understand that this is essentially porn/author’s fantasies. But at this point Doona doesn’t even have a consistent character ie she doesn’t even have basic core values set. She goes “I want to be aware of my partners and how they feel” to straight up “I can’t give more than a rat’s ass about you.” Honestly, it’s amazing that Minho and Doona even survived in Korea. The whole culture is very collectivist, so seeing Minho and Doona survive past college without any maturity is amazing.
Overall, I see it very difficult to really have a resolution to this story. Was the porn nice? Yeah. Will I keep reading? No. I like plot filled porn, so pass. Just like S Flower for me.