sorry
You should work a bit with the spacing
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i will ヾ(☆▽☆)
Your fic isn't the greatest however it's your first so it's completely normal. As long as you keep writing you will get better. Good luck!
thank you i will
So i really enjoy reading fanfic and i am trying to write one and that's what i did a fanfic on yours to claim cain x yawhi if you could please give me feedback that would be nice warning smut and rape https://archiveofourown.org/works/31097903