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I also think she needs to be more outspoken, but i believe that is something that will happen over time. Because right now she thinks she is going to get kill even tho the brother is a siscon. I hope for the best(๑•ㅂ•)و✧
I think if the FL was more outspoken then I would enjoy this more. Obviously the guy really cares for his sister. So she can tell him what she thinks. She spoke up for the knight that he was going to kill. But after he said he was just gona slit the knights throat. She should have said "don't kill anyone, I lost my memory due to when I got extremely sick when I arrived at the village. Like that type of outspoken is what I think will make her character better.
Also, after she asked him if her coming back home is not enough. She could have added, " This is who I am now. So we can slowly get to know each other again or would you rather I go back to the village." Something like that. I think her being like that and seeing the brother's reactions to it would be a nice dynamic.