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If the anatomics and the action was better drawn, it would have been a bit enjoyable. To d...

Cyrano May 13, 2016 3:10 pm

If the anatomics and the action was better drawn, it would have been a bit enjoyable. To draw a whip and write "throws down" above, or a figure and write "stops" , that's no comic drawing, that's just drawing and writing.
Plus, a sadomasochist relationship must be described much more subtly and with more quality, else it becomes unbelievable and exaggerated. (I am in a severe mood)

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    Well May 17, 2016 8:34 am

    Well, in a lot of cases the author writes onomatopoeias over th picture, so they would write a sound, such as "clunk," rather than "throws on floor." I don't mnow about this manga specifically, but translators often change the sounds into actions because everyone in Japan would understand the sound but there would be no equivalent the translator can think of in english. Japanese people have a lot of evident onomatopoeias that we don't have and a lot of natives don't even know all of them.