The art is fine, and I'm sure the story isn't too bad... But I feel the translations is what's weighing things down... (very hard to read!)
sorryyy! we tried to reword it but it was difficult because it's so easy to accidentally cut out something important TTdidn't help this chapter was also very concentrated in information so we didn't want to lose anything ( ̄∇ ̄")
The art is fine, and I'm sure the story isn't too bad... But I feel the translations is what's weighing things down... (very hard to read!)