Okie First: I’m not a huge fan of MC/ML being in love with MC/ML’s friend/colleague/relative that kinda adds a sourness to my creme brûlée. And in this case, it looks like Ryou is in love or has a sexual (past or present) relationship with Shion or they may have dated in the past, idk whatever the case may be with the relationship with them, there’s definitely something there... But hey-ho it gets the plot going and maybe at this point of the story the reason why the kiss has been just sorta tucked under the rug is because our cutie lil bambi MC/uke is still isn’t consciously aware/still hasn’t developed romantic feelings for the ML/seme and at this point he only recognises his feelings as admiration which is why although he was affected by the kiss it’s not being so prominently brought up in the story because it hasn’t affected the uke in a heartbreaking way. Second: I don’t know what page 28 of chapter 2 was about; it kind of felt very out of place. Whilst it definitely hits home for a lot of artists, it didn’t seem to really flow with the previous images/conversation from before. I’m not sure if there was any pages missed or what. But definitely out of place. Third: Isiki-sensei I’ve read all your works here now and I have definitely become a fan! Not only are your narratives so beautiful, your characters (drawings) are beautiful and distinct and by that I mean I can recognise them all individually and there’s a softness to them that makes it very dreamy yet still clearcut. Because not gonna lie there are many mangakas and manhwa/manhua drawers out there that I don’t know who’s who in their mangas/hwa/hua. I’d literally have to keep going back and think was this the main character (￣∇￣") Lastly: Thank you to the scans/translation team and the uploaders!! Please don’t drop this or any of sensei’s work ^_^
Okie
First: I’m not a huge fan of MC/ML being in love with MC/ML’s friend/colleague/relative that kinda adds a sourness to my creme brûlée. And in this case, it looks like Ryou is in love or has a sexual (past or present) relationship with Shion or they may have dated in the past, idk whatever the case may be with the relationship with them, there’s definitely something there... But hey-ho it gets the plot going and maybe at this point of the story the reason why the kiss has been just sorta tucked under the rug is because our cutie lil bambi MC/uke is still isn’t consciously aware/still hasn’t developed romantic feelings for the ML/seme and at this point he only recognises his feelings as admiration which is why although he was affected by the kiss it’s not being so prominently brought up in the story because it hasn’t affected the uke in a heartbreaking way.
Second: I don’t know what page 28 of chapter 2 was about; it kind of felt very out of place. Whilst it definitely hits home for a lot of artists, it didn’t seem to really flow with the previous images/conversation from before. I’m not sure if there was any pages missed or what. But definitely out of place.
Third: Isiki-sensei I’ve read all your works here now and I have definitely become a fan! Not only are your narratives so beautiful, your characters (drawings) are beautiful and distinct and by that I mean I can recognise them all individually and there’s a softness to them that makes it very dreamy yet still clearcut. Because not gonna lie there are many mangakas and manhwa/manhua drawers out there that I don’t know who’s who in their mangas/hwa/hua. I’d literally have to keep going back and think was this the main character (￣∇￣")
Lastly: Thank you to the scans/translation team and the uploaders!! Please don’t drop this or any of sensei’s work ^_^