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Ummm

rainbowslider May 24, 2021 9:35 pm

I’m on chapter 34, i don’t know if it’s just me or the artist made it like that, but i feel like sometimes the pages or the flow of the drawing is not in order. Like they jump from one scene to another and then go back to the previous scene, it makes the flow of the storyline quite awkward….the beginning has good potential but then i feel like it becomes weird. Just my opinion though.

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    xnixiexx June 18, 2021 8:04 am

    I get what you mean regarding the flow/order of the pages. I thought I was just tripping out tho.

    Layla June 20, 2021 7:05 pm

    Right! I thot so too. God forbid I offend some rabid believers here bt, with that lack of flow, added with the directionless point of this story, the continuous comic scene in almost evry panel… n as a reader, idk where this is going? :(