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meh its got an interesting concept and nice art but there is nothing but cotton candy in t...

Anonymous May 29, 2021 8:01 pm

meh its got an interesting concept and nice art but there is nothing but cotton candy in the FLs head. shes like la la la oh wowzeres I just teleported! Looks like im locked in under suspect of being a spy! woopsie doopsies oh wellllll! 0 sense of any kind of panic or normal human reaction to suddenly developing teleportation powers and being locked up. I also found it really cringey how she teleported into a kiss #-.-). I can tell i'm probably not going to like this story. Its got good art, good concept but not my taste in writing. If you like fluff and non-sequitur cutesy stories this is more for you. I was hoping for something with a bit of grit or drama but it looks like its shaping up to be a fluffy slice of life rom com with a cute and clutsy FL and a overbearing CEO ML.

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