If felt like it had potential, and then something fell flat in the end. I also had personal issues with it... those "God can't help you," statements that kept being thrown around... Sorry. Those don't fly. To make the setting a Catholic (Christian) church and then say God, the Creator of the Heavens and Earth, He who brought everything into existence from the merest germ to the greatest sun, can't help? Sorry, little demon, if this story gave God His due, you wouldn't say that so carelessly. You are just a rebellious angel He CREATED. He could squash you like a bug with a breath. The author truly had no concept of the power of God when they wrote this.
If felt like it had potential, and then something fell flat in the end. I also had personal issues with it... those "God can't help you," statements that kept being thrown around... Sorry. Those don't fly. To make the setting a Catholic (Christian) church and then say God, the Creator of the Heavens and Earth, He who brought everything into existence from the merest germ to the greatest sun, can't help? Sorry, little demon, if this story gave God His due, you wouldn't say that so carelessly. You are just a rebellious angel He CREATED. He could squash you like a bug with a breath. The author truly had no concept of the power of God when they wrote this.