1. She could've reincarnated to take revenge or not marry the mont emperor anymore or stop him from becoming the emperor over all. But the hard working author has to put her soul in a random witch with specific features who is hounded to death anywhere she goes. Duh, it's unbelievable the reincarnation is worser life than 1st one. No point in reinacarnating.
2. Putting a romantic plot in a serious thriller situation is like drinking milk with salt. So, timing is really important.
3. Both mc are powerful, atleast better than an average thug, so why is it they can't protect themselves?? Give her either intelligence or powers or powerful backing or a normal family!! Why is it that all of these are intertwined and nothing works to help her in emergencies..
4.last but not least, plot is not clear, 1st part portrayed fl as women who died by blindly believing a man when she is intelligent enough to learn his fathers intentions behind the marriage and ofcrse, trained well to protect herself but no, she has to see everyone she loved dying before her still believing none of this has to do with her husband . Well, I'll convince myself she is wearing rose glasses and couldn't see past through it. 2nd part she is portayed as a possible cure for ignis emperors trauma with witches. Duh, when she can form a plan with ignis emperor she is still at the heart of city, getting ready to be sold.
Points that could make this plot better
1. She could've reincarnated to take revenge or not marry the mont emperor anymore or stop him from becoming the emperor over all. But the hard working author has to put her soul in a random witch with specific features who is hounded to death anywhere she goes. Duh, it's unbelievable the reincarnation is worser life than 1st one. No point in reinacarnating.
2. Putting a romantic plot in a serious thriller situation is like drinking milk with salt. So, timing is really important.
3. Both mc are powerful, atleast better than an average thug, so why is it they can't protect themselves?? Give her either intelligence or powers or powerful backing or a normal family!! Why is it that all of these are intertwined and nothing works to help her in emergencies..
4.last but not least, plot is not clear, 1st part portrayed fl as women who died by blindly believing a man when she is intelligent enough to learn his fathers intentions behind the marriage and ofcrse, trained well to protect herself but no, she has to see everyone she loved dying before her still believing none of this has to do with her husband . Well, I'll convince myself she is wearing rose glasses and couldn't see past through it. 2nd part she is portayed as a possible cure for ignis emperors trauma with witches. Duh, when she can form a plan with ignis emperor she is still at the heart of city, getting ready to be sold.