If the pacing and if this was well portrayed the potential of a good story is quite high.. but the whole thing is all over the place. The concept is quite interesting but the way the story is being told needs a lot of fixing. It's too random and lacks the order.. lmaoIt's still good read but don't use your brain cells and is just for enjoyment. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
If the pacing and if this was well portrayed the potential of a good story is quite high.. but the whole thing is all over the place.
The concept is quite interesting but the way the story is being told needs a lot of fixing. It's too random and lacks the order.. lmao
It's still good read but don't use your brain cells and is just for enjoyment. ╮(￣▽￣)╭