It's incredibly interesting and since solo leveling I'm in love with this type of gerne. So first I want to say a bit of criticism:
In my opinion the pacing is kinda too fast, a bit slowed down would it make it even better and the emotion would be better to get, in specifically the told story's of the previous lives that tells us something as in example with that commander with his family. I kinda would like it more, if we could sink in his story more to feel his pain and hatred. I hope this kinda lecture wouldn't be the last, as it's interesting that he gains power through thouse story's and the previous lives. I wanna see him go from the absolute loser to his prime and I would take a lot of chapters for that to see his development. Now that I, the pacing in my opinion is way too fast. I really think the emotions is there but with the pacing slower it would be even better. We could put eh feelings more in it and feel it better. It's just my opinion thou
Her is my opinion of it:
It's incredibly interesting and since solo leveling I'm in love with this type of gerne. So first I want to say a bit of criticism:
In my opinion the pacing is kinda too fast, a bit slowed down would it make it even better and the emotion would be better to get, in specifically the told story's of the previous lives that tells us something as in example with that commander with his family. I kinda would like it more, if we could sink in his story more to feel his pain and hatred. I hope this kinda lecture wouldn't be the last, as it's interesting that he gains power through thouse story's and the previous lives. I wanna see him go from the absolute loser to his prime and I would take a lot of chapters for that to see his development. Now that I, the pacing in my opinion is way too fast. I really think the emotions is there but with the pacing slower it would be even better. We could put eh feelings more in it and feel it better. It's just my opinion thou