I enjoyed reading the story, but it was so much focused on romance at the cost of character depth. When sky's story started, I felt like it was way too looong and it wouldn't end. Also I was expecting some development from River. The story should have focused a bit more on glen's issues with his parents and brother. Should have ended with the brothers being on good terms. It has a lot of potential. Marin and Cory's story was too short. I wanted more of them. I adore our queens Pearl and Alex so much.
I enjoyed reading the story, but it was so much focused on romance at the cost of character depth. When sky's story started, I felt like it was way too looong and it wouldn't end. Also I was expecting some development from River. The story should have focused a bit more on glen's issues with his parents and brother. Should have ended with the brothers being on good terms. It has a lot of potential.
Marin and Cory's story was too short. I wanted more of them.
I adore our queens Pearl and Alex so much.