I see quite a few people talking about how they don’t understand the story but I do and I don’t blame others for not understanding. I don't think it’s because they just don’t understand I think it’s because the story is going so fast and we’re being thrown so much information at once. It’s almost as if we’re flying through the story so far. The pacing for this feels.. off.
Not only is the pacing strange but the character design isn’t the best, our FL isn’t ugly by far, in fact she’s very pretty (I’m a sucker for pink hair so I’m gonna be bias so take that with a grain of salt.) but the fact that it’s brought up that’s she’s supposed to be this great beauty every 5 minutes in each chapter is so forceful.. it doesn’t feel genuine. Feels like the author is trying to force us to agree she’s beautiful, like every time she’s mentioned they talk about her beauty. It’s off putting and doesn’t feel natural. The ML design and his brothers design is the biggest problem i have with this story, they all look alike. If you’re someone like me and you have trouble with faces then this is going to be your worst nightmare. The ONLY different in appearances between them is the hair length and earrings. That’s it, I was struggling to figure out who was who during the first 5 chapters.
But Their personalities are all different enough where it helps you be able to tell who’s who and that helps a lot, the FL personality isn’t anything special or unique, she’s your average “I don’t need no man” hyper masculine trait character who only has a soft spot of ML. ML is boring and your average hero and the brothers are.. well you’ve got the usual rough/ can’t hold their tongue type and the other is the calmer logical one.
This so far isn’t the most interesting story but I’ll continue it only because she has pink hair. Yeah, that’s the only reason.
I see quite a few people talking about how they don’t understand the story but I do and I don’t blame others for not understanding. I don't think it’s because they just don’t understand I think it’s because the story is going so fast and we’re being thrown so much information at once. It’s almost as if we’re flying through the story so far. The pacing for this feels.. off.
Not only is the pacing strange but the character design isn’t the best, our FL isn’t ugly by far, in fact she’s very pretty (I’m a sucker for pink hair so I’m gonna be bias so take that with a grain of salt.) but the fact that it’s brought up that’s she’s supposed to be this great beauty every 5 minutes in each chapter is so forceful.. it doesn’t feel genuine. Feels like the author is trying to force us to agree she’s beautiful, like every time she’s mentioned they talk about her beauty. It’s off putting and doesn’t feel natural. The ML design and his brothers design is the biggest problem i have with this story, they all look alike. If you’re someone like me and you have trouble with faces then this is going to be your worst nightmare. The ONLY different in appearances between them is the hair length and earrings. That’s it, I was struggling to figure out who was who during the first 5 chapters.
But Their personalities are all different enough where it helps you be able to tell who’s who and that helps a lot, the FL personality isn’t anything special or unique, she’s your average “I don’t need no man” hyper masculine trait character who only has a soft spot of ML. ML is boring and your average hero and the brothers are.. well you’ve got the usual rough/ can’t hold their tongue type and the other is the calmer logical one.
This so far isn’t the most interesting story but I’ll continue it only because she has pink hair. Yeah, that’s the only reason.