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i mean who wouldn’t be scared when they died at the hands of the ml and not only that he sounds threatening to her so of course she’d be on guard and afraid.
Yeah... thing is... apart of being afraid she has nothing. No personality, no brains... nothing. And that's the problem...
The pacing is weird and it feels like there are several missing pages. The FL so far has no personality trait other than "always afraid." ML so far has no personality trait other than "vaguely threatening." Art is solid but nothing distinctive or particularly eye-catching. Probably going to drop this.