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Second story confusing as fuck

Loli August 16, 2016 4:11 pm

Okay spoilers for second story but I'm not sure if I got it correct so tell me if I got something wrong.

So chronological order:
Glasses-kun dated GirlSato but he didn't know he actually likes AnikiSato. GirlSato found out about it and got mad. Then AnikiSato kissed Glasses-kun while GirlSato was watching. GirlSato killed herself then, Glasses-kun thought she killed herself cause of his feelings for AnikiSato, while AnikiSato knew why GirlSato killed herself.

Filled with grief glasses-kun won't date AnikiSato cause he thinks it's his fault GirlSato died. AnikiSato stalked glasses-kun, while Yankee-kun thought AnikiSato was stalking him.

AnikiSato saw NewSato, the lover of Yankee-kun. Wanting someone else to feel his pain AnikiSato dated Yankee-kun. Yankee-kun dropped NewSato like hot potato, even being chummy with him even though he broke NewSato's heart.

NewSato wanted revenge and got it through Glasses-kun, they dated and NewSato flaunted Glasses-kun to AnikiSato. NewSato's feeling weird (by guilt or love) and told Glasses-kun that he was using him for revenge.

Glasses-kun knew about it and still went along in hopes for redemption for what happened in the past. NewSato found out that Glasses-kun and AnikiSato have mutual feelings.

NewSato runs away feeling distraught/sad/or something. Glasses-kun said he won't let NewSato go.

So later on, NewSato resigns to his fate, and Glasses-kun saw how NewSato is lonely, how NewSato resigns to his fate. That's when he noticed his feelings of budding love for NewSato, Glasses-kun is hoping for a bright future for both of them.

NewSato and Glasses-kun hug each other, AnikiSato sees them hugging each other and feels sad then Yankee-kun arrives comforting AnikiSato. AnikiSato feels like he can fall in love with Yankee-kun.

The end. So is my summary more or less on point?

Responses
    Taine August 17, 2016 9:43 pm

    Thanks so much! It was a little confusing and all kinds of fucked up but this really helped.

    Anonymous August 28, 2016 8:16 am

    What made me tear up a bit was during Mei's pov. Because I felt really bad for newSato. I mean newSato and Yankee-kun only got caught up in all of this. I really liked newSato, I don't know why.

    BLtaku September 25, 2016 6:22 am

    This is also what I had in mind, and I wouldn't have been able to describe the plot as clearly as you had done.
    Great description. I love the names you had given to the characters - fantastic keys to remember them by, at least for people who only remember faces (which of course, I am a definite, returning member)

    YaoiFiend November 13, 2016 12:51 am

    Thank you!

    YaoiFiend November 13, 2016 12:51 am

    Thank you! (●'◡'●)ノ

    Misaki Usui January 18, 2017 7:41 pm

    I love the name descriptions you used LMFAOOOOOO (●'◡'●)ノ