The plot are all over the place. A chapter has like, i dont know, 4 plots. I get really confuse on what to focus on. I mean really, we will read about terrorism/rebel on one page and the following page you will find a couple talking about love like there is no threat to the kingdom and the following page you will find another couple. I mean don't get me wrong, i am very happy that all main and side couples are getting exposure but don't you think it would be better to focus on the plot where there is risk like the terrorism/rebel? I would understand the trauma plot of the mc, but suddenly putting some scenes that could be addressed later after the main plot is fully addressed is, i dont know, anti climatic. Anyway, i am just a reader. Just my thoughts hahahaha
The plot are all over the place. A chapter has like, i dont know, 4 plots. I get really confuse on what to focus on. I mean really, we will read about terrorism/rebel on one page and the following page you will find a couple talking about love like there is no threat to the kingdom and the following page you will find another couple.
I mean don't get me wrong, i am very happy that all main and side couples are getting exposure but don't you think it would be better to focus on the plot where there is risk like the terrorism/rebel? I would understand the trauma plot of the mc, but suddenly putting some scenes that could be addressed later after the main plot is fully addressed is, i dont know, anti climatic.
Anyway, i am just a reader. Just my thoughts hahahaha