It's so cringy...the story moved way too fast, there's no character development whatsoever, it doesn't explain what's going on leaving the reader confused and bewildered. It doesn't fully apply the setting and backstories either. The first time I read it I couldn't get through the first chapter without stopping and thinking wtf did I just see. Honestly, I thought it was written by a third grader on drugs- hallucinogens to be exact
It's so cringy...the story moved way too fast, there's no character development whatsoever, it doesn't explain what's going on leaving the reader confused and bewildered. It doesn't fully apply the setting and backstories either. The first time I read it I couldn't get through the first chapter without stopping and thinking wtf did I just see. Honestly, I thought it was written by a third grader on drugs- hallucinogens to be exact