The beginning of this story started off really good, then it just started moving in a weird direction with no real development, just problems without us really seeing it being solved in a more exciting way. Jinho and Minho’s relationship was flawed in so many ways and their relationship rushed. I would have liked to see more of gi taes background and more development for him more so then the stupid green hair girl and the sister. When I finished this and saw that this story was from the same author as bottomless swamp I would have never started it, cause that story just was pure hell to read after the first couple of chapters! Hope this author Get’s better with story telling and character building and knows how to not give plot holes and loose ends in their next story.
The beginning of this story started off really good, then it just started moving in a weird direction with no real development, just problems without us really seeing it being solved in a more exciting way. Jinho and Minho’s relationship was flawed in so many ways and their relationship rushed. I would have liked to see more of gi taes background and more development for him more so then the stupid green hair girl and the sister. When I finished this and saw that this story was from the same author as bottomless swamp I would have never started it, cause that story just was pure hell to read after the first couple of chapters! Hope this author Get’s better with story telling and character building and knows how to not give plot holes and loose ends in their next story.