It's good but could be better. We could've seen more side effects of their baptism. With that you can give the story a natural progression from start to end. Near the end, it somehow lost it's fantasy and quirky vibe to it which makes it kinda lackluster.
It's good but could be better. We could've seen more side effects of their baptism. With that you can give the story a natural progression from start to end. Near the end, it somehow lost it's fantasy and quirky vibe to it which makes it kinda lackluster.