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Yup, the second story is definitely better

Idrak July 16, 2021 12:58 pm

The first one was bland af. Not only it was way more rapey ( the hypnosis sex, the memory wipe),
the conflicts were not addressed properly and the characters were not fleshed out either. Too rushed.
The characters in this one have much more depth.

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