At first, I want to say that my English isn't that good...I watched Jujutsu Kaisen and yeah I do ship Gojo and Yuiji as well, also I like the graphic and that NSFW scenes were perfect BUT I need to say few things 1. if I was writing and drawing this as one-shots, I would make maybe longer chapters or at least I wouldn't make it this `fast`?!!?! 2. the language they were talkin' was a bit too harmful or vulgar I guess, just for me, IDK someone might like it (just my opinion) but for me, it was too much sorrry 3. as an author I would do this as a full story, not just one-shots. It would be more popular, believe me, and I would make the story more unpredictable and more like soft a slow between Gojo sensei and Itadori's relationship.
Also, I really loved the threesome scene with Gojo's younger self but I was kinda lost in the dialogues someway. That chapter was a bit faster and shorter as I expected. I thought you would play with the whole scene but I know, one-shots are about this. Simple, hot and short but still, I expected more
Anyways I support you so much and I don't want you to take this as a bad comment but as a supportive one <3
At first, I want to say that my English isn't that good...I watched Jujutsu Kaisen and yeah I do ship Gojo and Yuiji as well, also I like the graphic and that NSFW scenes were perfect BUT I need to say few things
1. if I was writing and drawing this as one-shots, I would make maybe longer chapters or at least I wouldn't make it this `fast`?!!?!
2. the language they were talkin' was a bit too harmful or vulgar I guess, just for me, IDK someone might like it (just my opinion) but for me, it was too much sorrry
3. as an author I would do this as a full story, not just one-shots. It would be more popular, believe me, and I would make the story more unpredictable and more like soft a slow between Gojo sensei and Itadori's relationship.
Also, I really loved the threesome scene with Gojo's younger self but I was kinda lost in the dialogues someway. That chapter was a bit faster and shorter as I expected. I thought you would play with the whole scene but I know, one-shots are about this. Simple, hot and short but still, I expected more
Anyways I support you so much and I don't want you to take this as a bad comment but as a supportive one <3