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I think it's me, I'm the problem

IwuvYu July 17, 2023 5:55 pm

This is dry as my mom's fried chicken. Don't get me wrong, I honestly saw potential since I really liked the jewel concept. And the Fl and Ml are really likeable but there's something about this story that bores the hell out of me. I think the way the story flows just really irks me (Idk I'm a VERY unsure person after all). It progresses annoyingly sloooow. To each their own though. Give it a go :>

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    fwopfwop July 20, 2023 11:25 am

    I felt that. Like it has all the qualities of a great rofan but just feels lacking something. For me it acks omf and pizaz. Its a average in everything, not overtly funny, or lacks the extra granduer in art, or the mc and ml just lacks that tension ig. But imma finish it cos i love the relationship of the duke and emperor bro #yayforunchaoticroyalfam

    lolzers August 1, 2023 9:05 am
    I felt that. Like it has all the qualities of a great rofan but just feels lacking something. For me it acks omf and pizaz. Its a average in everything, not overtly funny, or lacks the extra granduer in art, or... fwopfwop

    Bruh u people are reading too many shitty story where the girl gets reincarnated,rebirthed, grew up and met the love of her life (who ofc needs to be a prince/duke), and started planning how to solve all the disasters in the next ten years all at the first 1-5 chapters.

    Regarding their relationship Taking into consideration the timeline of the story, I don't think this two had even been together at least like physically next to esch other and bonded together for a month. So the pacing makes sense.

    And if its a bit more slow paced, that also fits, author is introducing a unique concept, its better to let the world be built carefully than jusy have 1 chapter and have every little laws and nuances thrown at you and never be mention again to ho straight to the lalaland of romance