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Chapter 10 - part 1 Is early autumn, place - south of the Yangtze River (the name of thi...

xxx January 17, 2013 8:52 pm

Chapter 10 - part 1
Is early autumn, place - south of the Yangtze River (the name of this river is also Jiang, Jingjiang etc.. - The sections of the Yangtze River have other local names or smth like that), the weather is still hot... The mountains (secluded mountains, their new place) are occupied by Lu Cang, Brothers and their families - they wanted to get rid of this sultriness… When the sun hides behind the mountains, they bathe in a stream....just to wash away all this heat .....
Lu Cang had returned to Jiangnan - it is a land to the south of the Yangtze River, and hid in some place in Hangzhou city - it is a point of contact with his Brothers in the Cangshan mountains.
Because he was afraid that Jing might seek revenge, he gave up their old place in the Cangshan mountains and led his people to another place in secluded mountains,a new shelter ...etc.. etc...
Lu Cang was tired, he found a rock and sat down, took off shoes and he plunged his toes/ feet into cool water... he began to recall - Jing... his name ...Although the memory can dilute this pain, but the heart knows his own bitterness, feelings of grief and suffering, he still can feel this deep feeling of sadness.
A month ago, Lu Cang appeared before his Brothers. A lot of negative energy built up in him so he made an effort to moved his wounded body and appeared. Everyone was shocked, but when asked about the reason why he was injured he made expression of pain, so they didn't dare to ask further. His physical condition improved, so his mood/ attitude also changed..
He even tried with some beautiful woman, but he couldn't.....
Almost every night a terrible ache from his lower part causes uncontrollable heat in his body ...only clenches his teeth.....
As a man he is useless, a disabled man. Such a luck - only he knows ....
Again painful memories, his life and feelings turned into ashes.
Even if not by his physical disability, he feares he is unable to love and he will be unable to accept somebody..
Everything started because of Jing's whim, Jing in a female attire etc.. - beginning of the tragedy..
If there is a fate, Jing certainly is in his(Lu Cang) life a biggest disaster ..
He wipes his body with a towel, and is looking at his reflection in the lake, the body in deep scars - injured shoulder, and shameful hole on his chest (self -done piercing) - it is a evidence that he wanted to end his life...
Immersed in his own thoughts, but suddenly a shout awoke him...... .His Brothers loudly asked who came….
Lu Cang a little smiled (because they a little exaggerated with this announcement), but in a moment his smile disappeared..
In the distance on a stone bridge there was a man dressed in white, his clothes floated....hiding his beauty..
In his bottomless eyes you couldn't see any emotions - that man was Jing..
Lu Cang quickly reacts and yelling : Everybody run ... run...

Continuation in part 2 of chapter 10

Responses
    i just left a reply January 17, 2013 9:04 pm

    THANK YOU XXX ! I LOVE U SO MUCH I WANNA HUG U NOW! OMG JING SERIOUSLY BECOMES A STALKER NOW! I FEEL SAD ABOUT LU CANG'S SITUATION.

    i just left a reply January 17, 2013 9:06 pm

    ...BUT I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT...

    Anonymous January 17, 2013 9:09 pm

    THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!
    for continuing your great translation :D

    Lip January 17, 2013 9:22 pm

    Thank you!! I think you should open a LJ account I bet you would have a lot of followes!!!

    H January 17, 2013 10:10 pm

    Thank you so much xxx! Oh no.... poor lu cang...

    xxx January 17, 2013 9:41 pm

    I don't create an account, I will post here

    my English is such a shame.... and I made so many grammar mistakes in these translations -- what a shame !!! Just pretend you didn't see.. OK

    Thanks a lot

    H January 17, 2013 10:13 pm

    Xxx is Cang suffers a terrible ache every night because of drug or pain in his lower part???

    +kamiGAMi+ January 17, 2013 10:24 pm

    good work xxx. thanks to the effort.

    now i can't wait how that Jing beg for forgiveness from Lu Cang, hope Cang would make it hard - super hard to Jing to get his forgiveness. :)

    happy cold morning to ev'ry one.

    Anonymous January 17, 2013 10:01 pm

    @xxx
    I wish I could speak such a good English. Sad that you won't creat an account. I would have followed you :)
    But here is fine as well :D
    Thank you so much for your work!

    F January 17, 2013 10:19 pm

    thank you!!!

    @xxx January 17, 2013 10:32 pm

    Xiexie.
    Thank you.
    Kansahamnida.
    Arigatogozaimasu.
    Merci.
    Salamat.
    Gracias.
    LJ account or not, you will always have our support and encouragement.
    We owe you tons and your English is refreshingly good.

    xxx January 17, 2013 10:56 pm

    @H
    because of PAIN
    Jing pierced his** - you know what

    xxx January 17, 2013 11:05 pm

    One more thing
    "As a man he is useless, a disabled man. Such a luck - only he knows ...." -(His Brothers don't know about his problems with ****) it means he become impotent

    zas January 17, 2013 11:29 pm

    Thanks a lot xxx, and ur english is great,poor cang a mare sight of jing and he's running. It's sad and funny at the same time. But mostly depressing: for someone that treated you badly to appear in front of you.i don't know what i will do if i were in cang shoes.like jing did cang, he treated him as though he wasn't important.

    Igarashi January 17, 2013 11:36 pm

    Why won't Jing leave Cang? He had taken everything of Cang. Oh well it'll never become a good story if they wouldn't meet?

    Rape O_- again, oh Cang !! PREPARE YOUR ANUS. lol

    Wkwkwkwkwk January 18, 2013 12:16 am

    Thank you... Thank you... Thank you...

    Wkwkwkwkwk January 18, 2013 12:16 am

    Terima kasih banyak

    Isahora January 18, 2013 12:50 am

    Jing is such a bother
    Why can't he let him go ? He doesn't even love him from the beginning.
    Lu cang was healing from his scares but this monster took away his smile and will harm him again :(

    Lala January 18, 2013 2:03 am

    I love you so much

    lilyaoifan January 18, 2013 2:48 am

    OMG!!! NOOO!!!! Y can't Jing just let Cang go after all the "revenge" and pain he give Cang. :(