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Theres a lot to unpack so why are you saying its so slow? Would you rather this be another sloppy story with no structure lmfao. Also the story makes sense to most readers so maybe the one whos slow here is u
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Theres a lot to unpack so why are you saying its so slow? Would you rather this be another sloppy story with no structure lmfao. Also the story makes sense to most readers so maybe the one whos slow here is u
The pace is going way too slow, I know I'm not on the position to be saying that but it had to be said. The writing is all over the place, and everything doesn't make sense. I'm thinking about dropping. Also these chapters are very short.