This is so rushed, at first the concept was interesting but as the story progressed and it ended the readers are left with alot of un-answered questions due to severe plot holes. It also feels like the characters are thrown into unnecessary conflicts in order to develop the main characters relationships(Ex: kidnapping situation) and if there is a big conflict the situation is developed/ written poorly and dosent really leave an impact.
Also It’s so funny how the shoes stick out each time its so obvious that they used some kind of model also the necks are SO thick
This is so rushed, at first the concept was interesting but as the story progressed and it ended the readers are left with alot of un-answered questions due to severe plot holes. It also feels like the characters are thrown into unnecessary conflicts in order to develop the main characters relationships(Ex: kidnapping situation) and if there is a big conflict the situation is developed/ written poorly and dosent really leave an impact.
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It’s so funny how the shoes stick out each time its so obvious that they used some kind of model also the necks are SO thick