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It had so much potential

potat.hoe_ August 8, 2023 11:11 pm

This story had sooooo much to give!!
It would have been interesting to see Ellie dealing with the time travel, adding that to the possibilities to see him growing closer and cultivate his relationships with the 3 alphas, while adjusting on becoming an omega all of a sudden. It didn't necessarily need to be 100 chapters, but would have been better if there were more than 3 chapters.
And don't even get me started with the baby. It doesn't make sense. I don't care if this is onegaverse. It just don't. If the author wanted to make them all 3 the baby daddy then triplets would have been perfect, with each of them having different fathers and same momma.
Overall it was cute and the baby's adorable.

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