An easy pitfall to land in when using flashbacks is making them last too long, and I definitely think that holds the story back here. ( In my humble opinion of course) Reading it became a little tedious. Certain points about their pasts could have been summarized into much fewer pages and conveyed to the readers just as well. It actually feels like the romance came to a peak prematurely with how quickly they met and became an item, I wish more of the many pages dedicated to their pasts could have instead been dedicated to getting to know these two a little better? Kinda feels like the flashback story is the story that the author REALLY wanted to tell and was the most interested in, I'm wondering if the comic should have just started there from the start. Again, all personal opinion. Im sorry that it’s a drop
An easy pitfall to land in when using flashbacks is making them last too long, and I definitely think that holds the story back here. ( In my humble opinion of course) Reading it became a little tedious. Certain points about their pasts could have been summarized into much fewer pages and conveyed to the readers just as well. It actually feels like the romance came to a peak prematurely with how quickly they met and became an item, I wish more of the many pages dedicated to their pasts could have instead been dedicated to getting to know these two a little better? Kinda feels like the flashback story is the story that the author REALLY wanted to tell and was the most interested in, I'm wondering if the comic should have just started there from the start. Again, all personal opinion. Im sorry that it’s a drop