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Could be better. I’m disappointed.

ballsack1235 September 1, 2023 12:12 pm

When I first read chapter 1 or the prologue, it seemed really interesting and I was invested in the plot, character dynamics and over all the general art since it’s so pretty. But I noticed that chapters 2-5 are extremely rushed, and the quality of the plot went downhill from there. I understand as a digital artist that this author may have other things in hand and this series is more like an idea that got scrapped. But hey! , the Author is extremely generous to even complete this series just so that their fans won’t be left hanging. Unfortunately this doesn’t change my opinion on the fact that it’s wasted potential. :(

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    J713D November 16, 2023 2:11 pm

    I agree! 8 think the story has potential but was wasted and I'm not sure if it was because it was a short story since there's other ones with the same amount of chapters and with a good development...maybe between the smooth, the time and the translation something ended up missing