The only masterpiece in this story is the line: "But all of those pent up thoughts and feelings will soon become "their fault"." This line goes for all- family friendship, partners..
I get that the authour is trying to create a plot hence the father's 8 year absence without contact. I mean it's sooo unrealistic well everything here is (fiction duh) but if I disregard common sense here I liked the story bec none of the chars for me is irritating. It's cliche but not too cliche-ish. It's drama but they are not being overly dramatic. The lines were written well; simple words but hits deep.
The only masterpiece in this story is the line:
"But all of those pent up thoughts and feelings will soon become "their fault"." This line goes for all- family friendship, partners..
I get that the authour is trying to create a plot hence the father's 8 year absence without contact. I mean it's sooo unrealistic well everything here is (fiction duh) but if I disregard common sense here I liked the story bec none of the chars for me is irritating. It's cliche but not too cliche-ish. It's drama but they are not being overly dramatic. The lines were written well; simple words but hits deep.