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This is getting so convoluted and boring

juuulya September 26, 2023 2:53 am

Why are there so many characters and plots happening? I thought the good thing about source material was that you can pick and choose what to put in your story, so why is the artist just jam packing every single little detail in here? This series had such potential, it’s really disappointing.

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    BLmakesMEUGLY September 26, 2023 2:59 am

    Literally thinking the same. I'm like wtffff! There are so many side stories and it's pissing me off. There's 67 chapters and we only get pieces of Jay's and Mc's story. I'm tired of hearing about the companies and movies and so on. It needs narrowed down bad.

    eeych September 26, 2023 3:12 am
    Literally thinking the same. I'm like wtffff! There are so many side stories and it's pissing me off. There's 67 chapters and we only get pieces of Jay's and Mc's story. I'm tired of hearing about the companies... BLmakesMEUGLY

    the movies is one of the majoy plot twist so they are emphasizing on it

    JJ the fish September 26, 2023 4:09 am

    i can tell you read stories just for the sex scenes you pervert. stop being horny and let the story play out. go jerk off instead of complaining god

    JAY September 26, 2023 4:36 am

    a lot of people actually like that it's following the novel quite nicely.... a lot of people actually read shit for the plot and not just the sex

    Silent Lucidity September 26, 2023 5:22 am

    Everything going on has a purpose. All these branches will come together in the end. There are two revenge plots being pursued- Yoohan’s (AKA Lee Baekwon AKA Lee Taemin), against Song Myungshin (AKA Song Yoohan) and Jay’s (AKA Director Yoon Jay AKA Han Jay) against Chairman Kim. These are also related to each other. It’s complicated, but ALL the plot lines matter. They’re not side stories.

    ghsthunt September 26, 2023 5:31 am

    its really not confusing at all wdym………and also its just plot heavy if u want something not plot heavy maybe wait or read something else (not insulting ik everyones tastes r diff :) )

    hanakiss September 26, 2023 6:49 am

    There are only two kinds of ppl who read yaoi - the short sighted pervs who just want to see porn and be constantly entertained, and those who truly appreciate a proper plot and storyline. Gee, I wonder which one you are huh??

    Slow Dancing September 26, 2023 7:36 am

    This is the reason why many BL-authors decided to create stories that lack characteristics, good development, and plot, because most readers are perverts who only want to enjoy some smexy scenes. It's no surprise to see many popular BL-stories with the main character and male lead engaging in 'deeds' in every single chapter, with no plot whatsoever. I'm glad that we have this story that emphasizes plot a lot. If you feel bored, it might be because it's not to your taste, not because of how the story unfolds. But if you would like to continue reading this, I suggest you be patient with how the story develops because it's going to be great once it's finished! The thing I've learned from plot-driven stories is that when they are still ongoing, they might make you bored or lazy to continue. However, once they are finished, and you decide to re-read them, they are going to be full of a satisfying feeling than those stories that are mostly having sex with minimum plot going around.

    ghsthunt September 26, 2023 8:07 am
    This is the reason why many BL-authors decided to create stories that lack characteristics, good development, and plot, because most readers are perverts who only want to enjoy some smexy scenes. It's no surpri... Slow Dancing

    YES EXACTLY!!! you’re so right on every point

    BLmakesMEUGLY September 26, 2023 9:04 pm

    Pls calm down. Not everyone reading the manga version is here because of the novel or even knew of it. We're just stating the lengthy-ness of the story should be for the novel. Whilst the manga should be more slimmed and to the point. I'm sure if you ever read or watched a movie/manga that some potions are needed from the novel/book whilst mangas/movies don't because there is visual representation. Because if not one chapter of the novel is like 6 chapters in a manga because you are tryna draw out/depicting every single word within the novel. And we're not tryna take away from the story/plot because we knew it's great, it's why we choose to read it. But there are moments where some chapters could have been one because they are following the same occurrence/part that is happening in the story.

    juuulya September 26, 2023 9:50 pm
    i can tell you read stories just for the sex scenes you pervert. stop being horny and let the story play out. go jerk off instead of complaining god JJ the fish

    Lmao sure thing, pal. I’ll leave you to this snoozefest of a story. I’m sure it’ll eventually become interesting, right?

    juuulya September 26, 2023 9:52 pm
    its really not confusing at all wdym………and also its just plot heavy if u want something not plot heavy maybe wait or read something else (not insulting ik everyones tastes r diff :) ) ghsthunt

    I’d like it if the plot was heavy with something even remotely interesting lol

    juuulya September 26, 2023 9:54 pm
    There are only two kinds of ppl who read yaoi - the short sighted pervs who just want to see porn and be constantly entertained, and those who truly appreciate a proper plot and storyline. Gee, I wonder which o... hanakiss

    “Proper plot” lmfao please. A “proper plot” is something interesting and to the point, of which this story is now neither.

    juuulya September 26, 2023 9:57 pm
    This is the reason why many BL-authors decided to create stories that lack characteristics, good development, and plot, because most readers are perverts who only want to enjoy some smexy scenes. It's no surpri... Slow Dancing

    I despise porn without a plot. But this is not even porn OR a comprehensible plot.

    Also it’s kinda funny to think that authors give a rat’s ass about what pirates think of their content lol

    juuulya September 26, 2023 10:00 pm
    Pls calm down. Not everyone reading the manga version is here because of the novel or even knew of it. We're just stating the lengthy-ness of the story should be for the novel. Whilst the manga should be more... BLmakesMEUGLY

    THANK YOU. All of these brown nosers claiming that this story is good because it’s true to the novel, acting like it’s not a completely separate media from it. I don’t give a shit about the novel, because this is not the novel.

    Silent Lucidity September 26, 2023 10:05 pm
    Pls calm down. Not everyone reading the manga version is here because of the novel or even knew of it. We're just stating the lengthy-ness of the story should be for the novel. Whilst the manga should be more... BLmakesMEUGLY

    As was stated, everything in this manhwa so far (other than a couple of weird sex scenes that did not take place in the novel) is necessary for the plot— and there MANY delightful twists and turns. Both Jay and Yoohan are cleverly crafting their revenges, and by its end it will all come together. The manhwa was made because the novel was so successful. I personally can’t see where it could be “slimmed down” without hurting the story.

    That said, the “pervert attacks” here are ridiculous. It should be expected readers coming into this without knowledge of the novel would find this agonizingly slow. Impatience over waiting for chapters is what drove me to find the novel, and then I feasted ლ(´ڡ`ლ)

    ghsthunt September 27, 2023 1:04 am
    I’d like it if the plot was heavy with something even remotely interesting lol juuulya

    it IS interesting not to you cause of your tastes but saying its boring is crazyyyy do u see whats happening like?? theres also not even that many charas or plots.

    juuulya September 27, 2023 1:09 am
    it IS interesting not to you cause of your tastes but saying its boring is crazyyyy do u see whats happening like?? theres also not even that many charas or plots. ghsthunt

    I suppose if corporate politics and language is interesting to you, sure.

    ghsthunt September 27, 2023 1:11 am
    I suppose if corporate politics and language is interesting to you, sure. juuulya

    idk seeing the character progression and how each chara has depth is interesting ☠ what else do u expect from the plot? (genuinely asking im wondering)

    juuulya September 27, 2023 1:19 am
    idk seeing the character progression and how each chara has depth is interesting ☠ what else do u expect from the plot? (genuinely asking im wondering) ghsthunt

    For it to not be boring. That’s it. That’s all I ask of anything I do for fun. I don’t care if they don’t get together in the end, or if they bang every chapter. I just want to have fun reading it.

    The only interesting things about this story are the MC and director relationship and the revenge plot, both of which are constantly being thrown aside for dumb side stories and exposition. It’s frustrating and disappointing because of how much potential this story had starting out.