The story isn't very clear, i didn't quite catch some parts, but it was enjoyable, until they decided it was a great idea to have the seme kidnap the uke and abuse him, and in the end they don't even talk as they should but the uke forgives him... Really unnecessary if you ask me, it doesn't contribute to the plot at all. If not for that part and for the fact that the seme doesn't explain that he did not, in fact, kill uke's parents (I still don't understand why he didn't try to explain or at least claim that ir wasn't really him), and uke forgives him as od it isn't something crucial for his character; the story is enjoyable and the smut is good, seme sucks dick all the time (which is very rare in yaoi)
The story isn't very clear, i didn't quite catch some parts, but it was enjoyable, until they decided it was a great idea to have the seme kidnap the uke and abuse him, and in the end they don't even talk as they should but the uke forgives him... Really unnecessary if you ask me, it doesn't contribute to the plot at all.
If not for that part and for the fact that the seme doesn't explain that he did not, in fact, kill uke's parents (I still don't understand why he didn't try to explain or at least claim that ir wasn't really him), and uke forgives him as od it isn't something crucial for his character; the story is enjoyable and the smut is good, seme sucks dick all the time (which is very rare in yaoi)