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I think there might be too many plot holes and not enough incentive for us readers to wait for them to be filled.
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I think there might be too many plot holes and not enough incentive for us readers to wait for them to be filled.
So far, the story line is just, errr okay? I guess. Anyway, shout out to the author that trying to create a something new, but the specific terms are quite long and sound lame. The development of the story is definitely interesting but it's still quite boring ╮(￣▽￣)╭.