as I read the comments, I would say that the art is decent, however…the pacing of the story is too fast, as I was reading chapter 20, I thought I was already in chapter 40 something in a regular webtoon…like sometimes, the scenario just suddenly changes and jumpes too fast to the next scene…maybe a more detailed storyboarding wouldn’t be too bad
as I read the comments, I would say that the art is decent, however…the pacing of the story is too fast, as I was reading chapter 20, I thought I was already in chapter 40 something in a regular webtoon…like sometimes, the scenario just suddenly changes and jumpes too fast to the next scene…maybe a more detailed storyboarding wouldn’t be too bad