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I liked it but the ending is somewhat...

TomieHanna October 15, 2023 7:54 pm

I think the ending is a bit rushed and made to be too dramatic in a sense. The story itself is nice, and the ending, especially the last part, is kind of unfit; the author shouldn't have turned it that way. It should be ended in a sense that is mostly connected to the whole progress of the story, for example, showing their families, children, and their moments in ruling the nation. There are so many things to show related to those matters, but again, the author chose to do that this way, and it's not suited and looks forced, to be honest. (っ~╭╮~)っ

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