Firstly with the story the writer should have just gone ahead with the smut because, this feels half hearted. There is not character development with the kid and uncle and also no character development between the couple. It's half assed on both sides. This should have been a fluff or just smut because the writer has failed to establish an equilibrium of both. It feels rushed and unrefined. I feel really disappointed
Firstly with the story the writer should have just gone ahead with the smut because, this feels half hearted. There is not character development with the kid and uncle and also no character development between the couple. It's half assed on both sides. This should have been a fluff or just smut because the writer has failed to establish an equilibrium of both. It feels rushed and unrefined. I feel really disappointed