I love this story and I'll continue reading it, but based on the spoilers, it just seems like Edith is constantly fighting for her life and isn't really able to get a one-up on the antagonists. I get the story's premise and the fact that the characters' actions can be attributed to the author's hold over the story, but it's a little...lame (for lack of better words) to have the MC consistently react to situations as they come along.
I love this story and I'll continue reading it, but based on the spoilers, it just seems like Edith is constantly fighting for her life and isn't really able to get a one-up on the antagonists. I get the story's premise and the fact that the characters' actions can be attributed to the author's hold over the story, but it's a little...lame (for lack of better words) to have the MC consistently react to situations as they come along.