I really enjoyed liking the characters and the story but I felt like this could’ve been at least 15 chapters. Sumito needed to know that Nibi is the crow he saved, the mPreg scenario needed to brought to light and actually fulfilled. I felt like dropping that part of the story, half-hazardly killing off Gaku and just ended it with feather being dropping to have a secret night out is meh. I’m wondering if the author got tired of the story and that’s why it has such a big rushed ending. Compared to the other works this one seems lacking
I really enjoyed liking the characters and the story but I felt like this could’ve been at least 15 chapters. Sumito needed to know that Nibi is the crow he saved, the mPreg scenario needed to brought to light and actually fulfilled. I felt like dropping that part of the story, half-hazardly killing off Gaku and just ended it with feather being dropping to have a secret night out is meh. I’m wondering if the author got tired of the story and that’s why it has such a big rushed ending. Compared to the other works this one seems lacking