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The Smut parts are good but imo...

qu33n_chicken November 1, 2023 12:37 pm

For the first story: It was cliche and so boring also I cant understand how can u honestly like someone that would sleep with anyone at anytime for so long, couldn't be me┐( ̄ヘ ̄)┌. Before they got together and even when they did, the seme was constantly jealous and watching the uke incase he jumped on another guy's dick. . yeah...no, he doesn't even feel secure in their relationship. Plus the uke constantly loved to lead the seme on before and even after the seme confessed, which is such a disgusting behavior. Their entire relationship is weird and unhealthy. The only good thing about that was the ukes tits.
The second story: Is okay, it started off wierd but they end up being really cute.
The third story; is the BEST. Out of all of them honestly. Not just with the plot but the characters and their amazing chemistry, plus their relationship is also cute and healthy. That one should have been the one to have more than one chapter wtf.
I'm conclusion, the first story sucked and the third is the best.v( ̄ー ̄)v

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