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Very Poorly Written

Kanna November 3, 2023 1:04 pm

I couldn’t make it past like Chapter 10, where a huge bombshells was dropped and resolved in like 5 pages.

The plot, character development, conflict, and conflict resolutions are just so badly written.

This is definitely just for the smut.

I was excited to see 20+ chapters, but in the end, was so bad I couldn’t finish.

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