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Exactly! A proper slow burn is them slowly getting close to each other, development friendship and trust and such. Not having 70+ chapters of misunderstandings despite both leads liking each other yet being a shy wreck in front of each other.
I waited so long for this story to be completed to the point were I forgot about it. I stumbled upoun it on a tik tok comment and I immediately came back to reread it..
I'm so glad I did, this is the easiest 10/10 for me. The reveal about dillian and adeline was so perfect I actually felt like weak in my legs. They were always meant to be and I actually can't believe this wasn't what I expected.
First of all this story didn't have UNESSECARY ANNOYING MISUNDERSTANDINGS! AND IT'S A SLOWBURN THINK ABOUT THAT. I depse slowburn because of those reasons but this story didn't have it it was peak. the two do the communicated beautifully with each other if there was one it would be resolved either in the same chapter or the next. I never felt frustrated because of them.
Their feelings were developing so nicely and it was wonderful.
This is slowburn but it was such an amazing written one, I didn't feel frustrated like how slowburns are usally written because the two of them were already so loving and caring with each other. Omg. I love dillian's personality her sharp canines are so adorable. The two of them get along so well as friends so many romance stories miss that in their main couple relationships. They have to get along first and dillan and cedrick were so adorable. They goof of which eachother prank each other make fun of each other. They were such a delight to watch interact rather than the cliche stand offish/embarrassed behaviour most of this female leads have.
Tbh dawg I fell harder for dilian and I did cedrick don't get me wrong cedrick is like a an ss-tier male lead. My favorite chapter was definitely when he realised he fell for Dylan and literally kept commenting on how he couldn't breathe and his face was red the whole time it was adorable.
But Dylan is actually peak female lead, her cheekiness and loving character are actually to die for. She has like an insane amount of rizz and she isn't afraid to speak her mind.
This is how you write slowburn make it actually burn and not just them being slow.