This is why not every good artist is a good story teller

You're right

All the other stories from this author have something or the other wrong with it, I can't even-

overall you're right, but that's actually not the case with this story, cuz the artist just illustrates here and they are doing a great job. BUT the author (= the storyteller) is fucked up lol and you can see it clearly in their other stories. they do have an eye for artists to collaborate with tho, I'll give them that