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Bro ur expecting too much bc this is just a yaoi it doesnt have to have to be perfect as long as it has prn
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Bro ur expecting too much bc this is just a yaoi it doesnt have to have to be perfect as long as it has prn
First off, I enjoyed reading it. Especially in the beginning because I think it has a lot of premise for a good single father BL story. But then the whole 'father complex' thing kinda threw me off a bit. It's not like its bad, but I think it could've been done better? Not to mention the overall plot seems a bit rushed? They both just met each other and they already told their whole life story. Also, this is one of the instances where the sex disrupts the storytelling. If there were more communication and spending time together and less sex, their relationship would've been more believable.
Overall its still an ok manga, its just a shame because it could've been better. Usually single father BL or childcare stories consists of a small child or baby, so I was hoping to see more with a teenage son/daughter..